Impossible promise

by Ole Carsten   Feb 25, 2012


Loveless I feel
You turned on your heel
Asked me to promise the impossible
To communicate on other terms
To draw undrawn pictures
To write unwritten poems

That is impossible.....

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for your kind comment

  • 13 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Wov like that

  • 13 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Lioness our wild beast in the kite runner club
    thanks for the comments, it is short because the feeling is harsh, my love one tried to ask me to give a promisse that I knew I wouldn't keep, and that wasn't fair
    br
    Ole

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh I love this, short but wow!

    Awesome poem!!!

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Karla

    Beautiful piece Ole.

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