Rhyme and flow was stellar. Your determination to move on was clear. Excellent write enjoyed each line

Your poem so well written, very deep.

Flow and ryhme is maintained.The words u hav used to express are simple but intellectually sequenced making them meaningful nd poetry a compact form.
A unique kinda writing ! Appericiated !

Rhyme is great, awsome poem:)5/5

Oh hun I am so glad to see another poem from you.

This is so powerful and so sad. I love what you have written.

The first stanza blew me away! To me it's as if you were telling yourself by using the words "I'll bleed you out" as if you were talking to yourself in a way.

AWESOME!!!
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Jenna, my sweetie, I am amazed by this piece, it is such a sad write with so much emotion, I could really feel your pain

I sincerely hope this is fictional for it held some very powerful words that almost felt too strong for me.

Love
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Awesome piece.Simply loved it.

Yes you are right, we can do something by our own, set your self free

positive thinking in an odd place
love it

This is really amazing. i really love your writing style.

Short and straight to the point but amazing. You used brilliant wording and it flows perfectly. I enjoyed your rhyming cheme. You never cease to amaze me.

Danika
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I really like the fast pace, and it's kind of like a cinematic script. The rhymes alone can suck you in to the dark atmosphere, so what's about the bloody images?

cool write.

I really enjoy the flow and the rhymes
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Such raw emotion! I really like your choice of short lines...it added tk the intensity portrayed by your words.

Well done!

I love dark poems, I love these types of poems, I'm glad I decided to take a look at your poetry.... the title drew me in of-course, bleed. knife to skin, I like that opening and I agree with everlasting you have a nice flow and nice rhymes - makes this dark poem an even more enjoyable read :)

Knife to the skin
Convictions in doubt
Silently screaming
I'll bleed you out

^^
Very vivid imagery.
Perfect flow, rhyme and pace here.
Fantastic opening stanza - really sets the mood for the poem.

Yearning for truth
In a lifetime of lies
It took this pain to
Force open my eyes

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Great follow up from stanza 1.
Kept up with the rhythm of the piece.
Again, great rhyme and flow.

Now I will drain you
Pour you out of me
In a crimson storm
I'll set myself free

^^
Powerful ending!
Again, good use of imagery.
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OVERALL;
I love how relatable this piece is.
I also love the fast pace of the piece and the rhymes were great.
Dark, emotional and angry!

Keep writing. 5/5

Badly intense. Raw and deep. Wow on the image you show here. Gave me a chill for the way you want to move on.
Excellent(: