Awww, I love this!!!

Such a sweet poem but awww that she's with the wrong boy in school :| kinda sucks!!!

I love the rhyming and simplicity.

Awesome TJ

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Awww thats so sweet:)
I like the poem:)

I think this is a really interesting poem. I liked the rhymes and think that they somehow display the "naivety" of the speaker.
Enjoyable read. :)

The girl is sugar but lethal sugar!!

Loved it.

Short and sweet my king.Loved it.

Only a real sweetheart could think that way about a girl who double crossed him;)

Well done, sweet cheeks

5/5 Ingrid

Oh... wow... this is a sweet-n-sour poem!! Well done TJ :-)

Good poem, this poems offers the reality of the sweet girl or guy. They are often like a good drink, but just like a good drink too many can be tradgic. Good job

So its like let her keep breaking my heart but you can't even dream of doing it..my dear you must have a strong heart...take care.

Sweet poem bro. The theme of this poem indicates one sided love/crush/infatuation.

Very well written.

Wow I love this and the fact that even though she hurt u or betrayed u that you still think she's great an still like her,,a great write u penned this poem well :) 5/5

This is a really sweet piece, one that I don't get tired of reading. Though it's sad but it also shows that the author has an amazing heart.

Reminds me of the song title 'With Or Without You' by U2 :)

Such confused state & yet so very nicely expressed, great write bro.

all the best and take care

I loved the way you have expressed. And even though it feels bad, the last line is really sweet. Beautiful write :)

' Then she took this boy to school ' ouch! How could she ! ...........she is not the one :)lovely poem TJ

This is sweet and different, really apreciated reading it :)

Awwh see, aren't you a sucker for love. This girl seems to have you wrapped around her finger. It happens :/ Love is blind. Still, I think this is cute :3 Questionable dignity though, you're right.

Absolutely loved this :)) Short, but sweet! And very cute :D

I like how you described the subjects character. To me; she's a good lover you can't seem to easily forget, a diva. No matter how you ignore her, been a head turner you just can't help but get attracted to her. Got me laughing, short but nice. Blessings to you, Adios!

This was one of those poems i think almost everyone can relate to...Loving someone who just seems to break your heart but u can't help but still have feelings for them...great job!