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Ty for ur comments. Your right i should use "you" instead. It was about 2 in the morning when i wrote it, so i probably half a asleep. It's one of my favorite tho.

Oh I do love short pieces that say so much.... very deep and touching piece, also with your word usage It's very elegant...

I would like to give you just one opinion If I may...

In your first line:

"You are more than what u seem"

instead of using "u" spell out "you"

It just looks a bit better and this piece is really a beautiful poem......

I really love this pretty poem :-)

Very short with a deep meaning