Sweet Dream....

It's beautiful :) well done

I have at least three favorite stanza's but I love the entire poem alot and I love how you wrote it and how it's expressed and the emotions flow well and it's worded with wisdom and worded greatly,,I really love it and I really enjoyed the read especially since I know the feeling well and I relate alot,,also it's very inspiring and encouraging and I think it will help others and open eyes and I'm sure many others relate,,,great fantastic job,,,amazing 5/5

My fav stanzas:

Tomorrow isn't promised to young or old alike,
Today may be the last day I'm able to hold you tight.
Don't wait for tomorrow, do it all today,
If tomorrow never comes, you'll never regret a day

Sitting on the steps, looking across the lake,
Wondering why, life at times, can seem great.
But in that second, it took me to just think,
My life could change, faster than a blink.

So I'll cherish and take nothing for granted,
not say things that shouldn't be chanted.
If this is the last day I have on this earth,
I accept my life, for what it's been worth.

It brought tears to my eyes.
Every single word in this poem is right, I love this poem, great:)