It's good and i keep changing my sceen name it's really hard for ppl to know who u r when u don't have that screen name anymore but this poem has imagery and emotions a good combo in my book but that's cause i helped oh well!

Nice work, very visual and well put together. :)

Well written lav..you have expressed your emotions wonderfully

-Deep sigh- Trying to be strong when the person who's got your heart just passes you by...Ugh, that's hard, I know. :( This is touching and sad, and easy to relate to, definitely.

Good write from the heart, its nice to see a different perspective on the heart, yet alot of people can still relate to this..

5/5

Very nice poem =) and you should never be sorry for falling in love, especially when your both emotionally attached

A different look on a way to leave...less violence more crying...sounds like real life to me. Great job luv.