Comments : Get the fuck out

  • 11 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Anyone who treats you less then amazing doesnt deserve your love. Ive learned that the hard way.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, I really felt my heart break as if it was yours as you expereinces this destress, except for the last thing it reminds me of a guy I know at school, maybe I'll show it to him, wonderful job, you are talented

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow, I can see lots of pain and anger
    in this poem. Name calling, being treated
    less than a human. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by zombiepikachu

    Very relatable! I liked your rhetorical questioning, in line 9. I think you have a good start. But I challenge you to revise this. Make it more.... Obscure. Don't say everything you want to say so plainly. You can hint at what you mean without actually stating it. You can use derogatory words, and convey the same meaning. You can say the same thing, it'll just feel stronger. I hope you take my thoughts into consideration.
    With that said, it is a very nice poem. Keep it up c:
    -z

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Whoever said those things to you should die because nobody should say that