Liz-

I just fainted!!

I love this piece... you managed to create a powerful, poetic gem, on a powerful topic.... I do love it when people get inspired... to speak out, on injustice... and inhumanity.... this poem is a must read...!! love it!!

Wonderful film, wonderful poem my friend.

This piece just made me eager to watch that film. that's how good it is. I agree with Andrea, its a must read!

Wow this poem is great I trully like it:)

I haven't seen the movie but this poem moved me. Each line was a credit to your ability to write..Excellent

I've seen the movie 1 month ago, and as I told you it was awesome!!! haha the best part was: EAT MY SHIT!

darn it,,, one minute I became sad, and the other I used to laugh.

You have beautifully showcased Aibileen's torture.. love this.

Beautiful write to highlight prejudice/discrimination in society. X

Your poetry is different. I'm not used to read such a style and I like that. The title caught my eye, I love titles that contain numbers, it feels like it has some kind of significant imports or mysterious meaning to it. You began your poem with the 'I wonder' standard sentence that every poem about life would begin with and that's what made me not really interested, that might be the only thing I disliked. Bathroom usually refers to an intimate property, and 'humble' made me think of pureness rather than indigence or imperfection. Black has loooots of meanings, so does white but black and white together might be embodying routine or old.

'I will reverie when
the time will come,
but for now it
remains a mystery...'

That was so poetic, truly, I could get what you meant by your poem through this stanza. I LOVE the word 'reverie' I can spell it till tomorrow, haha. I love it more when it's put as a verb more than a noun. Daydreaming always is connected with time and I so love that you mentioned that. I just have one minor suggestion, if you wouldn't mind, I'd say 'when time comes' instead of 'when [the] time [will] come'. It's your decision, I just wanted to point it out. I liked how you used 'segregated' when talking about bathrooms (intimacy). How impressive! And oh, can you believe that I've never read the word 'blatant' in a poem?

I loved this poem, creative and catchy, the ending two stanzas made it all for me. I didn't watch the movie qactually (perhaps I did but not remembering what the hell it is, haha) but your poem made sense to me, however. It was good to read your poetry!

I watched the movie the help a few weeks back and I loved it so much. I thought it was a really good movie and I think your poem really captured parts of the film.

On one hand I feel the poem is a little too long but on the other hand in order to say what you had to you needed a bit of length.

I liked how you put each stanza together and I loved how you titled the poem with a date.

Over all a fantastic piece.

5/5