Love when u miss

I loved this poem and thought it was cute and sweet

I love u when i think about u i love u when i feel love i live u when i get sick i love u when i feel happy i love u in all things i do so be with me :)

Maybe change it to

I love you
Every time i think about you

i love you
whenever i feel love

i love you
when i get sick

i love you
when i feel happy

i love you
in all things i do
so be with me? :)

Just fixed it up abit
Grammar and the structure
Just my opinion I think it flows better

But all in all
Great poem hun!
5/5

OMGoodness you are a good writer

Yeah actully i was busy when i write it so u know

Yeah actully i was busy when i write it so u know

This is cute but need a little help