Comments : Please don't cry....

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Beautifully written! Speechless!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Beautifully written! Speechless!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Beautifully written! Speechless!

  • 12 years ago

    by Heavy

    This just comes to show that, just because, it's not meant to work out, doesn't mean that you stop loving and caring for that person. I really understand that! Your heart is in the right place. This poem seems sincere and sweet. It's really nice of you. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by lost angel

    Some people are just not ment to be together because you have a stronger brother sister love. and sometimes you just dont want to let them go but you cant have them in your life in that way.

  • 12 years ago

    by Justin

    I like how you went away from the Please dont cry , and started the stanzas with something different , and then ended it again with that start, very nice write and again people can relate to it, we write very similiar , mine just cause from the guys perspective =D

  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    Nice oem really i can feel it well done so sensetive and true words bravo 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by The Ninja

    This is awesomesauce.... :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Awww this is cute and sad :[

    I'll be here when times get rough
    when it feels like no one can pick you
    I'll be here to back you up.

    When no one seems to care
    I'll be there to make it alright
    So wipe away those tears
    destroy the past and begin again

    it seems like when we love someone so much we'd do anything for them.. even after theyre gone.

    love it girly :]

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Nice :)

  • 12 years ago

    by aphiwe boiboi

    Good poem but it's not easy to just move on lol

  • 11 years ago

    by govind singh tomar

    Gud job.

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    We al need smone in our life who knws us better..

  • 11 years ago

    by jeffery sechrest

    I really really liked this one it almost made me cry almost

  • 11 years ago

    by jeffery sechrest

    I really really liked this one it almost made me cry almost