Very BEAUTIFUL! :) 5/5

U start a greet from-"hey little" addressed with care and affection of a mother.proceeding care and affections the desperate voice of mother towards her son-"My son,my joy".Now that really holds a diligence!
Well,the write is almost complete...I just suggest u to categorize your lines in paras and marks,that would give a good descent and appropriation.
In all, a very efficient and degree write.
Appreciated !!

Aww very sweet! :)

Great dedication..no matter what mistake you did, you got a blessing in return. This was heartfelt and full of true emotions. Lovely write.

Congraz