Snake

by Mr. Darcy   Mar 10, 2012


Snake he slithers on the ground.
Snake he doesn't make a sound.
Snake he climbs up the mound.

Snake hiss,
Snake STRIKE!

Snake with his evil red eyes, Snake slithers so fast he could fly.

Snake hiss.
Snake STRIKE!

Snake with his venom so strong,
Snake his patience is very long.

Snake hiss.

Snake hiss.

Snake sleep.

*This poem is by my son, Lucas Moran aged 11 years
Written 9.3.12 as a piece of free writing

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very good - the imagery that one so young has conveyed is excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I love the pace and the spooky feelings I got while reading. I actually like this style. I think your son is really talented, and in 4 years he will be like boom-boom!

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    Little man...I think you have done a great job here and I also think adults tend to shield children from the truth so...I will let you dad decide how to monitor this...my dog got bitten by one of the snakes you are talking about.. this snake slithered and slithered and made it's strike....my dog died. I'm glad you are aware at your age about the dangers but...again...dad please monitor what you think is right.

    Nice to see you back Michael.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Michael:)

    How wonderful to see your son inhereted your talent!

    Tell him he did really well, I could almost see the fearsome snake myself:)

    Hope you are doing fine, my friend..I get the strong feeling that you are!

    Hug the little bugger for me and tell him he did fine:)

    (((hugs)))

    5/5 Ingrid

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