by Ole Carsten Mar 15, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
first love
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Dancing in dream light |
by Ole Carsten
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Thanks for the kind comment |
by Odin Ebbesen
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Love this poem, great work |
by Ole Carsten
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Hi Mostafa |
by Mostafa
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Wow, this piece shows profound and powerful feelings yet you formed it in a sweet and delicate way |
by Autuumnbree
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Sensual yet sweet, I like how you relates making love to dancing I think that this piece flows well and keep the reader attention. Good poem |