All is change, all is not.

^^
Indeed it is. We are awareness in motion.

Well done..

I should have loved you. I should have
Changed you. But only gazing upon your
Beauty did I. Atman is sacrifice to deny.
Suffer not the desires of love.

^^
All is at is is, no need for regrets, you did things as you saw fit..all things go exactly according to the master-plan.

5/5 Ingrid

Oh this beautiful!!!!! very pretty nature piece~

What you have spoken in my mind
Clearly I've seen before the earth was fives.
Cast from the mud to live and thrive,
Beneath the lotus flower there lie I.

^This opening stanza starts off with a suspense as to what the writer is then the end shows that for this delicate thing you are its life, its support.

Pretty flower exuding grace
Our fragrance I want as sweet.
What grows and changes always is one,
The seed, the sprout, the stem, the bloom,
All is lotus. All is change, all is none.

^Its like you want this bond to grow and flourish, to be one and inseparable...soft and tender this stanza is!

I should have loved you. I should have
Changed you. But only gazing above
beauty did I. Atman is sacrifice to deny.
Suffer not the desires of love.

^This leaves the reader with a sadness knowing that even though the writer yearns for more he tries not to get too attached for he will only get hurt by this beauty, well at least that is the feeling I got reading this...touching stanza.

But, foolish, flower I follow thee.
Water touches not the delicate petals
And touch not I. My heart is joyous
And content and settles.

^A lotus is always a lotus it floats without wanting anything more and its very petals itself is so smooth that not even water sticks to it...just like this bond..just stand from afar and admire its beauty but not touch...how beautifully you have penned this write..lovely!!

Beautiful!

This masterpiece is like the moment the sun sets. it's tender and precious. it's so beautiful and i love it.
^.^ plz comment on mine

Wow..this is wonderful

A great poem. ^,^ your a good writer. really liked this. Beautiful 5/5

Beautiful piece..
Good work:)