The galleon

by neon sunset   Mar 31, 2012


Shadows drift upon the old groaning ship.
the whispering wind whips.
i observe the waves from the galleon.
the stars light up the sky in millions.
the breeze whips my long ebony hair into my face.
my vivid blue eyes look up at the sky of space.
the rain droplets beat me,the ship,and waves.
i stay brave even know i may wake in the ocean's grave.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Thats really impressive !
    U made an excellent portrait with that perfect dark background that has a blend of uncertain challenges u seek.Truly u hav the skills nd the style of expressions nd words u use hav a touch,interesting!
    Appreciated !!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhhhh what a powerful dark write.... well done!!