I thought this was a sweet poem. I will take it stanzas at a time

I love you so much more then words can say, its your love that ables me to get thru the day.

This part was great. Described how deep your love is for that person and how they can lift you up every day.

You make me laugh when i dont even want to smile, its a happiness i haven't felt in a while.

This was good too. Showed that even when your feeling at your worst. that person is building you up.

Everytime i look into those beautiful eyes, i can see your love for me is real, all real no lies.

This was great that you can really see the person for who they truly are. No hiding. Just the real them.

i want to be with you until the end of forever, saying goodbye, go our seperate ways.. Never.

And of course when we love that person enough we will want to be with them forever until the end of time.

All in all a nice write. Great job. :)

This poem was great, it was simple yet it flowed beautifully. Finding that one and and falling in love with him, that must be a priceless gift. There's that commitment you give to at the end of the poem, that promise that is so sweet and shows love lasts forever. Good job :P

Aww this poem is so cute hun

The rhyme was beatiful
And you wrote it so good!

Just showing how much you truly love him

5/5 from me x

THIS POEM IS #1, 100/100, great job, INSPIRING/1

Spoke to the hidden core of my soul!