Comments : The Perfect Clown.

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "From the look in their eyes you see happiness,
    little do you know that THEIR a mess."
    Their should be "they're"

    I think there is a "clown" in all of us.. Whenever we try to hide our real feelings.

    Excellent piece 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I love your word choice in this poem and the topic, sometimes we all wish we could be a clown to hide the pain, a fake smile permanently on our face.

    I really loved this poem great work

  • 12 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    So many smiles, on so many faces, all painted on various places. A smile for you, a tear for me, tears from sadness, tears from glee. Look at all the smiling faces.
    This poem inspires me. Thanks for bringing out the clowns inside us all.