Inside im dead

by kristen   Jun 27, 2004


Don't make me cry
I'm all out of tears
you'd think I'd be strong
after so many years

my soul has been broken
from the things that you say
if I'm too weak to crawl
how will i run away

trapped underneath
a sea of your hate
and I'm sorry to say
I'm afraid its to late

i just cant go on
with you bringing me down
my tears building up
in the crease of my frown

so ill let out my pain
in a whole different way
with the wrath of the blade
send the sadness away

feelings of guilt
are clear in my eyes
I'm coming unglued
getting sick of your lies

why don't you see
how i hurt deep inside
the remorse in my soul
i can no longer hide

so i cut and i cut
and I'm sorry to say
with each crimson tear
i feel better each day

so ill continue to cut
because inside I'm dead
these tears i cry
in brilliant shades of red

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  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    that was an amazing poem, absolutely awe inspiring loved it to pieces great job, definite 5 from me!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Hey Kristen. Wonderful work. This poem was very heartfelt. I liked the wording as well as the flow. Keep up the good work and take care!
    Kind regards, Kristina

  • 19 years ago

    by Ş∂ņďħy∂

    This is a beautiful work. In each line you can feel the pain. I hate people who cut. But i really understand their pain. PLease don't do it if you are upto. But i must say this poem is really really good. ***** :). Love trincy.

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicole Kinder

    that was an awesome poem! very well written and expressed! good job on the rhyming too! good job, dont stop writting!

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor Porton

    Hey Kristen! You commented on my poem, "Laughable Lesion", and I wanted to tell you how much I appreciated it! I wrote that way back in September, about my cousin and NOone had written a comment until now. Thank you. And also, I wanted to tell you that I voted you a "5" on this poem. I can relate completely. Read my poem "Another Day"... I think you might like it =)

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