Aw i like this alottt(: good job

Great poem 5/5

Awww this is so cute :]<3

reading this made me smile<3

5/5 girly great job!

Well written babez..full of hope and desire, i loved it. The rhyming get it a great flow.

Short simple cute <3

I want to be that
girl that's with you
all the time

You start it off with desire, longing ang hope. Very good. You just want to spend all your time with this loved one. Great introduction.

I want to feel
your skin pressed against mine
I want to hear your voice each
And every day of my life

I felt the desire in this. You just want to be that persons everything, all the days of his life.

With you I'll forget
My sorrow
Just so I can be with you
Tomorrow

This person makes you happy. All your worries disappear coz you feel safe and secure with him. These type of people are hard to come by and dont lose him please.

Thinking you're always beside me
Hoping that you'll never leave me

You end with hope as well. If its true love, its guaranteed to last forever so you are safe lav.

Pleading awaits a desire.. Answers found, come from what you seek. Good-luck, as you sincerely search.