My shining star<3

Wow girl!

Your my shining star,
you shine in the sky so bright,
the love you have for me,
is bright enough to light up the night.

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Wow.
Knowing his star that shines bright in the night sky. And his love is so strong for you that it lights up the night. That stanza was amazing knowing his the sun that brightens up your day..beatiful write

Your my shining star,
your the brightest of them all,
You'd do anything to catch me,
you'd never let me fall.

^^
Aww this is so cute
His your shining star knowing he will always catch you if you fall. Never will he let you fall. Fav stanza

Your my shining star,
I can spot you out from all the rest,
I love you so much,
compared to others, your the best.

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This stanza said a lot
How his the best out of them all and you could spot him because he shines so bright. This shows the love you have for him how he will shine your darkest days..I love it

Your my shining star,
you make my wishes come true,
my shining star,
i dont know what i'd do without you<3 :]

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What a beatiful way to end it
Saying he makes your wishes come true and without him you have nothing

Such a sweet love poem
It shows how much you love him

Beatiful write Hun
It flowed beautifully
Just perfect(:

10/5 well written

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Very sweet poem! Another great job!
My favorite stanza
"Your my shining star,
your the brightest of them all,
You'd do anything to catch me,
you'd never let me fall."
So true and such a great job wording! Love it :)

Yup, :]

Everyone has a shining star. I found this poem cute.