Unspoken

by Sweet sugar   Apr 6, 2012


Unspoken words shudder the glass that's build inside of me,
My reactions revolve to what's insanely haunting me,
Crazy how this one thing is following me,
Your unexplained theory of why you left me,
You disappeared like the person I ones was,
No remains except for the memories,
Left behind is my broken heart,for you to keep as a trophy,
While I stay empty inside, it's better and easier for me to hide
Should of know you were no good,
Now I'm heartless,scared,hidin,all of this remains unspoken

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  • 13 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    GREAT ONE=)

  • 13 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Unspoken words shudder the glass that's
    build inside of me,"
    build--built

    "You disappeared like the person I ones was,"
    ones---once

    "Should of know you were no good,"
    I like the message of this line, but it would be better if you revise it to: "Should have known you were no good"

    "No remains except for the memories,
    Left behind is my broken heart,for you to
    keep as a trophy,"
    This is my favorite part. No matter what has happened, in the end there's still the memory to haunt us..

    Great piece 5/5 Keep writing :)

    -X

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet sugar

    Thank u very much :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashley Nicole

    This is beautiful <3

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