"Have you ever loved someone so much,
just the thought of them
brings tears to your eyes? "

^ A powerful opening, would resurface buried memories for many.

Have you ever looked into someone's eyes
and saw eveything you would ever need?

^ Indeed, when you are in love the eyes speak more than words, only if you know that there is truth in thoses eyes. This language of the eyes can communicate a lot more in a short time if you have found a soulmate. Words can be flowery and imperfect, but the language of the eyes is much more trustworthy, if one can move beyond infatuation.

Have you ever thought you
weren't good enough,
but that one person makes
you feel beautiful, inside and out.

^
This is indeed noble, to disregard imperfections and see only the beauty. One would never want to lose such a person, when possible, but to cherish for a lifetime.

Have you ever tried to fake a smile,
but someone always knew the truth?
The real you?

^ Another astute observation...the people who really understand you read your thoughts with your little gestures, and protect you. That is really love, tuned to perfection.

Have you ever loved someone so much,
you never go to bed without
their voice being the last one you hear,
when you see them sad it
breaks your heart a million times over,
and their kisses make everything better.

^ Indeed, sharing your loved one's sadness, giving them your deepest empathy, and receiving the same in your time of need, means your souls have begun to unite, and love is going to last, longer than you would anticipate.

Everyone deserves to find
a love like this,
once in their lifetime<3

^ Agree, if only perfection like this was easy to find in real life....to last a lifetime. You would live your life in the 7th heaven.

Beautiful and thoughtful composition, deeply moving to the reader. Best, on your forthcoming life changing event.

I really liked this...i loved how you talked about looking into someones eyes and seeing everything you'll ever need. That was a beautiful verse :)

This is really sweet

"Everyone deserves to find
a love like this,
once in their lifetime<3"

Love the ending the most. Shows hope to those who haven't found their true love...yet :)
Great piece, Tammi. Really enjoyed reading this 5/5

-X

Gr8 poem i love it sooo 5/5 keep on =)

All i can say is wow.. this is an excellent piece.. beyond excellent.. its very touching..
10/10 great outstanding job...

It was a lovely read, the points that you stated are beautiful. I hope I can find my someone some day hopefully not to far away. 5/5 without doubt.

I almost dropped a tear.everyone really deserves a love as geniune and honest as what expressed in this piece.flawless.

I almost dropped a tear.everyone really deserves a love as geniune and honest as what expressed in this piece.flawless.

I almost dropped a tear.this piece made me say awwwww.great write

I almost dropped a tear.this piece made me say awwwww.great write

Have you ever.?
thats so cute..Tammi..gud art..keep growing.

Beautiful poem, everyone deserves to find true love like this. <3 5/5