I'll fake all the smiles
And hold back all the screams
great line I hav felt this many times in my life

I'll fake It and say
"I'm ok"
And know its not
Right....
great I hav heard this a lot its 1 of the biggest lies ever people saying that they r ok but actually not

I'll fake it all
If it stops the
Questions....
amazing great way to end it its very true u did an outstanding job I loved it

"The whole nigt"
typo:night

I have days like these, when I just want to write something even if there's no inspiration. And this is very relatable to me.. People constantly asking questions are irritating. Questioning your life, your past, your mistakes.. It just degrades a person and make them feel alone in this over-filled world.. Great write 5/5 :)

-X

The truth to be told. You did an awesome
job. The faking part, the questions stop
can relate to that

I feel the same but you express it way better.

Girl u were right u have grammer mistakes but then again poetry is letting go so it's good for me just retouch it up a bit okay?

5/5 like always girl :)

I totally understand that feeling. 5/5

Nice poem there is "The whole nigt"
nigt should be night i think
other than that i love it
5/5 keep on =)

Keep writing, The emotion is felt within this piece despite the little grammar errors but then again I have plenty of those.

Sometimes the need to write is all that is required....

Yeah at least you tried right? well id maybe change the stanzas around a little but other than that a sweetly sad poem. its sad that someone would have to go about life like this. i think that lies the true tragedy here. wonder poem however

Wonderful bravo:) 5/5

..yet it's quite better, now you have shared.. Well done! High 5! from meee..