It's great :'(

Wow

Amazing poem

Knocked my socks off! Wowee!

I love it, it's so dark, it pulls you right in, 100/100

N the end you're dead
Shouldn't you be happy?
This is what you wanted to your last breathe,
So enjoy being a dead body and becoming a nobody only remembered in memories
You choose this in the very end my dear loves
well done

Good poem

"Kiss that sorrow away,
Dance upon that gorgeous dead body that's soon gonna be decay
Tell the souls that you once loved that you're gonna be okay"

wow breath taking seriously! I mean when I read this I literally "WOWED"

5/5

Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
Jenn.

WOOOOOOOOOW this is totally amazing i love every single word in this poem i'd like to give u 100/5 but i can only give you 5/5 truly deserve it keep on =)

Such an amazing poem girl....

This is great as all your poems are :)

Good pen.
Adan7777

Sad but beautiful lines...
I liked it!Well written poem...

Steven

Some small grammatical errors that im sure you can just edit away. other than that i couldnt find a rhyme scheme however, other than those small little things i enjoyed this a lot. i think of this mostly in a song and in that respect its awesome, almost Gothic. i think you should re-write some lines to maybe add some extra depth to the piece. overall pretty good write.

This is a good write, very dark and somewhat sad, I enjoyed the read