Thanks for sharing this poem. I really enjoyed how it is heartfelt and honest. Its simplicity really make this poem work.

"Foolishly freezing me for a while.."

great line!

Yes I too liked that line. Nice one! (and a great poem!)

I like the way you word your poems, they are not worded perfectly but that for me is the attraction of them.They sort of come over all innocent, i know you dont intend that but its cute.

This really nice

COMPASSIONATE, I love it, so caring, and anyone who has ever been in love can relate to it, fantasic job

I love it. It makes me feel so much better that I am not the only who is foolishly in love with another person who have no idea. :)

Cute and sweet poem :)

Loved ur poem..its awesome =) ..a lot of girls can relate to it... loved the way u described boy's appereance.... short and sweet i should say...keep the good work up... may god bless u :)

Loved ur poem..its awesome =) ..a lot of girls can relate to it... loved the way u described boy's appereance.... short and sweet i should say...keep the good work up... may god bless u :)

Thats so nice u wrote,My mind can't digest one girl can have feeling too for his friend or lover,

Simple and delicate. Nicely done!

Good point.

I like this poem. Very nice

I lav everythin bout this piece...ur description of how and why u love him is amazing...i realy liked how u end it,realy amazing....

:) very cute poem :) really like it...

Trying to hide your feelings for someone isn't easy.. yet, expressing it through writings will relieve your unspoken thought a little.. ^_^
i can relate in this poem!

PERFECT!!.. i like it! ^_^
keep it up!

This is so cute and adorable. You described your love for him, thus, letting us in on his looks. Very lovely crafted piece. We all get tangled inlove with someone whom hardly knows we exist. Its good you layed it out through writing. At least that's a relief. I hope he'll come to notice your feelings for him, perhaps he might have. Smooth flow and well said. Good job!!!