I wish I could have

by Ole Carsten   Apr 27, 2012


I wish I could have:
Wished you a safe journey
Told you I love you
Convinced you that:
Love is a wonder
Told you my feelings
That you promised me:
Love is a wonder
Told me you love me
I can only think loud:
I do miss you much
Emotions is in me
I am longing for:
A solid warm hug
A sealing kiss.....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for your kind comment

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Hi love this poem, touching my soul

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Everlasting
    Thanks for your more the kind comment, I appriciate it very much

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I found this piece somehow sad yet refreshing for your hopes are high and I truly hope that tree would be a sealing kiss with your love.

    I love the ending and aside from sad I found it also sweet and tender.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Fly High
    the idea here is to reflect on the reflectable, a mixture of hopes and believes blended with trust.
    I am kind of foolish in my trust in other humans. I trust in advance, like I fear in advance. Foolish to I know that
    I reflect and loove you comment, like your are stating I like how it sounded, if that is the fact, you just made me a bit happy

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