I'm just trying to write about the loop mirror form of poetry..what do you think about it?

Wow.. Hehe..well it's a good idea, by trying to be inventive on this. I guess this would make a difference in due course, if you could refine the needed skills with continual rehearsal. Maybe, a try would make do.. More grease gem!

I haven't heard of a mirror loop before, that's what prompted me to click on this and read it. This is somewhat similar to a 'palindrome', a poetry form I've read a lot of times before.
This was well-written, considering the fact that I find it quite hard to write one (lol)
Some parts are unintelligible, for me.
"Again stand to
strengthen you make
determination with
full life hope."
---this was confusing for me.
But overall, props to you for getting out of your comfort zone and trying something new :)
-X

Wow this iss different thats what makes it amazing :)

This is a very nice poem

Well i think this is very nice
and very very hard to write lol
so well penned
it was enjoyable read 5/5 keep writing =)

Hope of life full
with determination
make you strengthen
to stand again.

It is indeed determination that makes us to continue fighting for something. No matter how hard we fall, if we are determined, we get back up and continue to fight on. This was a great introduction.

Challenging life is
struggle to survive;
Endless is journey of
life

Though life is said to be short, i feel at times it never ends. But i do believe life is a struggle to survive and i really liked your choice of words here

Life
of journey is endless;
Survive to struggle
is life challenging.

Though am not good with loop mirror poetry but i must say that this is really creative and interesting to read though i had to read it over and over to fully understand..lol Loved how you turn and twist your words, really creative.

Again stand to
strengthen you make
determination with
full life hope.

This was a nice ending to this piece. Encouraging people not to give up hope, to continue standing, to fight on no matter what.
5/5

For a person who attempted this style once i have to say Brava!! it waw a nice piece and the words fit well with the title and style as well I like this piece, keep on writing

I think it is one of the most exact mirror looping poems that i read ... a bit short but greatly fun to read , short sentences clear ... i like them :) u dont seem a new writer ... so i will be looking forward to read more ...

I think it is one of the most exact mirror looping poems that i read ... a bit short but greatly fun to read , short sentences clear ... i like them :) u dont seem a new writer ... so i will be looking forward to read more ...

Awesome..veryyy..creatve...very..challenging..and..very...deep..well..done

I really liked it, well done:)

Great poem!Well written!

Tho am not familiar with art of such writing i cn only say itz really beautiful,kip t up

Oh wow!! I think that is one of the coolest things EVER in a poem. Im not kidding. I'm going to have to make a poem like this now. This is a favorite

Very creative, well done :)

I really liked the mirror idea you have in this poem, very creative. It would of been difficult to make the last two stanza's make sense when mirrored, i've not seen the mirror form before in a poem but the poem flowed really well :)

5/5