Noway! :O

I had tears, chills, goosebumps, pants, (ok haha Noura has pants) and everything!!! Chelsey you just broke me with this poem and honestly? I know PERFECTLY what you were talking about and the person this poem is for! That made it even more heartbreaking! and I agree! this person is so rude and harsh to leave you like this, to just ...leave! I know how innocent and lovely, and OHHHHHHH how I love you! I know how beautiful ur soul is and you just made me fall for it even more with this piece! I cant help myself but cry because this might be not ur best in structure and metaphors but it's TOO honest and good to be true! It's your best in emotions, it's your best in everything that is human! I loved it like nothing else...this just made me open my mouth with wonderment...this person must be ashamed and this is a slap on the face for them!!! I love how you said that they appear in a number of your dreams, you dreamy little cute, awesome poetess! I loved how you soooo damn purely expressed that part...and the fact that this is short made me longing for more yet...knowing how frustrated you feel..stop reading when I stop making any sense, deal? I just feel SO damn in love with this, you are the best sister and friend anyone could ever have Chelseey...believe me!

I don't know if this will make you feel better, but with your honesty in this piece you inspired me to say something to some0one honestly as well...caring not about the results, THANK you! psst and I guess you know what that is! :|
Even when we have those silly funny fights in the club, I feel you are my sister, my lovely bigger sisterrr! <333 it's just...you DO know how much I love you!
I adore you, keep smiling!

Nominated!

Featureeeeee thissss!

Talk about being blunt.. damn.

ain't no wrapping of a cute little bow,
they are some feelings we can't sugar coat.

this was good, harsh, honest, but good.

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and please Nano get a grip of yourself lord, you are all over the place.

That bothers u yakz? Calm down and dont tell me what to do or where to be, sugar!
Chelseyyy do feature it!

<3333333333333333333333<333<333

oh my god, nano.. like woah <3
..........I love you,.,.!!!!!********
be all over the place.. <3333<333<333

xooxoxoxoxoxox

NO.

Didn't ask u for that ,i asked u to never nose into whats NOT ur business ;) take it to pms if u wana fight me! Chelseys comment area is not for such crap

But you will always remain to the back
of cob-webbed corners in my mind

Wow chesley I liked this poem a lot, it is awesome and i agree with Noura, feature it, and I love how you ended it as well,er your friend like their no long simple and powerful..........sucks when you lose friends. but it was awesome poem!!!!!!!!!!!! i've read a bunch of poems about loss freindship and i gota say this one is pretty up there, so awesome

5/5 !!!

Chelsey,
I don't know what to say,
LOOK AT YOU, How confident and sure you sound here, the bluntness and reality of your words girl, is like MAD

I love this piece, I can relate to it alot but you just blew me away!!!!!!

Holy, I agree with the above.

I'm not sure who is that person or anything but if I was in their place, it sure hurt me with the honesty.

and the flow and the. . mm( _ _ ) mm. . .

Dude, this really was a remarkable poem! Very well expressed and SO SAD! Awwwh 3: That must be really tough to lose someone like that - urgh

Yes, you may be certain peoples pride and joy
even the kindest person they've ever known
But to me you will always be the harsh,
the one who gives no explanation

Obviously showing just how two-faced this person really was :/

I feel like I can't come up with a good enough comment to flatter your poem so I'll just say this - keep your chin up, Hon (Like you obviously are!)

5/5

Great write, lots of emotions

Very sad and emotional.

I don't know who you were sticking it to but the poem was awesome! I loved the directness and it feels like it was a way for you to release what you needed to say. It showed your strength and as though it was some kind of closure for you.

Awesome write hun!

x

Oh...how I can relate to this write....in this damn moment...

So much emotion, great write. definitely can relate. 5/5

Oh, very sad..so emotional..you have a good writing skills to contrived your feelings in this piece. I like the way you worded it..whole parts wrapped with vividness and the sanity of your work here is very impressive. Very well written:))
~C