OMGoodness that poem made me get my mind off the fact Josh is mad at me and if I don't play my cards right this could turn into a big fight, this cheer me up, maybe Josh will love me again

Very Very Very Amazing!!!!!!!!! :) 5/5

This is really great :)

The assurances you give to your loved one are warm and real. I would suggest you put some commas especially the first stanza so that the poem flows better. Good work lav

Josh just read it, he thinks it's a good poem, it's a miracle, lol.

Nice poem
i like it a lot
have many emotions
powerful emotion all the way through the poem till the ending line
flow was good
word choice was nice too
some grammar mistakes like
"Our daughter proud to call us mom and dad,"
u should say "Our daughter is proud"

"Seeing us still in love like that once ago day."
this line wasnt flowing as well as the rest of the poem

I suggest u change it to
"Seeing us still in love like that day ago."
flowing better for me like that

other than this i love this poem a lot
but to be honest i can expect what u are writing
"as somebody told me be4" makes it a bit boring to read as u dont change the image you try to show a lot
i think you should try new style to write in and look for new images and so

still good piece
5/5 keep writing =)

True love, so sweet. <3 5/5

Positive outlook, A pure romantic indeed..
great writings..
5/5