by Lofallenve May 15, 2012
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Saccharine, as if honey dripped from her lips, |
by East Poetry
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Very nice, love the words you use in it as well. |
by Yrem Crish
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I like the way you write saccharine in starting part and in the ending. Very creative of you, I like the rhythm and the imagery. Nice penned:) |