Awesome. It is so nice to read a rhyming poem with such beautiful flow. But from you I expect nothing less lol Thank you for keeping rhyme alive here on this site. A wonderful tribute to someone on this site- I hope they get to read it. If I have votes consider yourself nominated hun. Very very beautiful poem Randy :)
but the last line was the one that truly did it for me
-let your wings stretch forth -
I found so much inspiration within those few words, aim towards the future, and keep going open up and achieve, that's what those words mean to me. I actually there is more but in general that's how I can say them.
This is fantastic! I love the rhythm; it could also pass as a song. It does seem that he has the best of us, when we're at our lowest, and we forget that it's only because we let him get the best of us.