Really touchy. My heart palpitated and shivered in the last line. I was shocked the way you put your words here..direct to the point!

"I'm not interested in food tonight,
just you-"

It is really impressionable:)

Well this made me chuckle since you painted the scenery so well in my mind..... So vivid! lmaooo! We got some saucyyy girls here on PnQ indeed! Hahah cheeky write!

The ending's parents must've been terrorist cause it was

The bomb! Xoxoxo

The ending... you beast!

Haha Andrea... such a smart, cute, defined write!

love it

You go girl!

I loved the title, fit in perfectly with your poem!

Who needs spaghetti if your appetite calls for something sweeter ;)

I love this! It's amazing that you have felt that you had this connection with the string of pasta that was alone on the plate, as if you knew what this pasta was feeling. Personifying it bringing together an awesome love poem.

x