I can not lose you

by Tiller   Jun 27, 2004


I love you very much
when I'm not with you I'm very sad
but I'm happy from the slightest touch
please be with me all the time

i can not lose you
its just not right
i hope you know
my love for you is very tight

if i lose you
i will be very sad
i don't know why i would
i did nothing that is bad

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  • 17 years ago

    by Flower Child[hippie]

    Aww. this is sweet tye u wrote it for me huh;] lol jk jk but its cute good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I liked the last stanza of this poem! Only one suggestion I would capitalize "I" . Other than that good short poem! ~Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiller

    comments not quotes i just caught that now lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiller

    thanks for all the good quotes

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiller

    PLEASE comment this poem NO BAD COMMENTS

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