When I read this poem, I was so full of inspiration. You showed such a brilliant idea and I'm in aw. The lesson within these words is so magnificent that mere words cannot describe how much I love this poem. The words, flow, everything!!
I have nothing to critisize, so keep it up, and if it were possible, I'd vote this the best poem that exists!
This poem is on my favorites list now ^_^
Tiller, when I first saw this poem, the length was a little daunting, but when I got to the end, I was shocked. I haven't read anything new from you for a long time. This was a great one to come back with dear. Everyone needs to learn this lesson and you wrote about it wonderfully.
This peice was amazing.
In the begining I thought it was gonna be about abuse, but then it turned out to be forgiveness, and really got me thinking.
It flowed beautifully,
and really touched home.
This is really different to what i'm use to reading. I like the story which was portrayed behind a poem it was interesting and I didn't get bored at all. From start to finish it was an enjoyable read with a great flow which didn't lack at all in any places, although the poem was long the flow being so chant like made it go so fast. I liked the lesson behind this piece it was quite capturing to tell you the truth. A cute piece with the emotion of sadness. Well done on this keep up the great work. ~mel
You had me hanging on every word.
The depth was amazing,
so was the emotion you put into it.
Mind you, in my mind, those are diff. things.
The flow was unexpected.
I didn't think it would go so smooth.
Shows how much I know, huh.
Good work with this one.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5