Comments : My Dark Skin Blushes

  • 12 years ago


    Great one Joseph! You are doing well!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Illusion

    Staring at you can be my leisure
    For thy beauty pain would be my pleasure
    Your worth is more than any earthly treasure
    My love for you has no bounds and no measure
    That's my favourite part.. This poem is just great...

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I'm not sure everything went together but its romantic and sweet,,quite beautiful to the touch,,I loved and enjoyed reading ur poem :)

    My favorite part:

    Well actually I loved it all :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    WOW. Great poem. I really enjoy reading from this piece..keep writing, Joseph:))

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenn

    It was good, very romantic. :)
    Good visuals.

    Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Well penned joseph..

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I would touch the sun and burn my soul
    And when am dead i would still be bold
    Death would be sweet and even just for you
    As i taunt it fearlessly like a bullfighter and his bull

    I liked this stanza. I felt the ryhming in stanza 1 were kinda forced. A poem doesnt necessarily have to rhyme but apart from that, saw no problem with it and you have written another amazing poem that i really liked. The emotions you convey are wonderful and so are the words you have used. This is really a beautiful love poem.