Staring at you can be my leisure
For thy beauty pain would be my pleasure
Your worth is more than any earthly treasure
My love for you has no bounds and no measure
That's my favourite part.. This poem is just great...
I would touch the sun and burn my soul
And when am dead i would still be bold
Death would be sweet and even just for you
As i taunt it fearlessly like a bullfighter and his bull
I liked this stanza. I felt the ryhming in stanza 1 were kinda forced. A poem doesnt necessarily have to rhyme but apart from that, saw no problem with it and you have written another amazing poem that i really liked. The emotions you convey are wonderful and so are the words you have used. This is really a beautiful love poem.