The truth

by Mathieu   Jun 3, 2012


I can't believe wat i have become,
can't say even my faintest desire,
i can't trust, cos i don't believe in hope,
is it just all about me and some selfish desires...Nope!
I can see where it started,
and i walk towards where its gonna end..
I cant truly believe its me,
because it has been me all through.
Me, metamorphosizing into truth...
But alas! My memories all drowned in oblivion

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  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This is a nice Decastich form poem (10 line poem), a little more continuity would be nice but that's just an opinion.

    Also just my opinion, better to write the words not in slang form for a more professional approach.

    Well done!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Nice poem keep it up

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