Hmmm...that is what the case is always isn't it..we fall in love with our eyes closed until they leave us and tell us there was nothing between us. All that is left is memories and pain...hope you will get through this because there is somebody else better out there waiting for you...take care.

You show such raw emotion in this piece!
The ending is superb - just perfect!

5/5

I like your expression

Simple but beautiful, I have to admit I would love to have read more, however, I respect artistic style and still enjoyed this piece.

I loved the emotions here...they are raw n so nicely described with simple words..
The opening n ending are just so powerful!

*_*

Understanding comes, through some pain. When the sun sets, the moon rises.

THIS IS AN INTERESTING PIECE KEEP IT UP

Amazing poem, made me sad, but always made me feel understood, great job, I enjoyed reading it

Truly saddening and heartfelt!
Good piece my friend:)

Wow your work is beautifully compiled ... I really liked it everything Is just perfect and exactly at the right place ....

AFTER THIS PAIN NO PAIN REMAINS A SEVERE PAIN.