Beautiful free verse Karla :) You do have a way with words, always

Indeed very well expressed and in such an interesting and thoughtful manner you don`t see that often! And you even managed to put Greece(if I remember right) mythology in it too xd. Great work keep it up!

Karla~
Beautiful piece. I love mythology (:
I love how you incorporated mythology; both Greek and Roman aspects of the goddess, and you tied it in with the persona's story.

'What is June but a still life painting
where I am the hidden seed
of a passion fruit?'
^ This is just brilliant. Persephone's story is about eating the pomegranate seeds; I love how you used passion fruit instead, and comparing yourself to that fruit which is considered by some as the forbidden fruit.

This is just breathtaking. Will nominate! Keep writing.
-X

This poem is inexplicably touching. The way your thoughts flow together is so delicate, compact with imagination and life. 5/5

mandy :)

Clouds cry on the windowsill
and the curtains are eternally closed
for darkness has no time to leave..

excellent..

Written with verve, dear Karla:)

To be alone in June, to be a rose in full bloom and no one to celebrate her beauty...yes, that indeed is a waste:)

Great stuff from you,

5/5 Ingrid

Im your #1 fan,Karla.
never
stop
writing..

I have to say Karla, that it is so good to finally read a poem where the seasons match the seasons in Australia, I think it makes it a little more realistic for me, and I can then easily relate to it.

In Australia, Winter starts in June as well. June is my favourite time of the year and so is Winter. I love the rain, the cold the storms everything about Winter. It holds a special place in my heart.

Your poem is filled with awesome images and I love what you have written here.

Awesome!

x

What is June but a still life painting
where I am the hidden seed
of a passion fruit?
What is June for an inexperienced poet
like me whose hands still tremble before
the mysterious solstices?...

amazing, just so well written

You are a very talented writer, this poem is amazing.5/5

Great talent here with words Karla!