This is one cool write :-)) the sense of emotion in it is sooooo strong, written with upmost conviction. I really love this write steven just fantastic 5/5

Great piece..

A powerful message full of emotion and imagery. Very well written and I agree with every word! Wonderful write.

I feel the emotion coming from deep down
within,

True, all of it. Well spoken, this needs to be said over and over. I hope the tide will turn, it would be a bloody miracle if it did..but still, we need to focus on the things that are positive.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Its a pity what is happening around in the world.
Whatever done in the past we now pay for it,
likewise whatever that is been done now the
future and our children will pay for it...its a
vicious never ending cycle..Well said my friend!!

Typos: "river styx" is supposed to be "River Styx" since it is a place. However, it is your poem :)

Interesting poem here, Steven. I have a feeling that you do not like politicians at all, or have a grudge against some of them. Politicians do seem to run the whole show don't they? They try to persuade people to be on their side by promising some great thing, and then they end up not even keeping their bargain. Most of them are compulsive liars. I have not yet heard of one that was honest and true to their word.

Anyway, this is a good poem. For some reason, this reminds me of Dante's Inferno. Weren't politicians said to be in the eighth circle?

Excellent
5/5

Powerful poem Steve.