Oh nice :-)

Angel, I really like your poem...I like the imagery and the simile here. Very well written.
5/5
~C

I wish that I,
Could be up there.
Flying around,
Without a care.

lovely and smooth...loved it

The introduction was amazing. It painted a picture in my mind of a girl staring at birds in the sky.

Your wishes and desires in the 2nd stanza i think are dreams of most people. They all wish to fly with the birds and just not care about life anymore, hope your wish comes true though..lol

The imagery you put in this piece is amazing and you use simple words that flow freely and wonderfully.

Loved the part you describe you sit on your bed just wondering about birds, i felt it was amazing and well expressed.

The ending was also amazing, loved how you expressed your hopes of having wings of your own and just flying with the birds, well written.