I have two spirits once mine and the other my grand pa

Nice poem... i like the feelings of it

We die all day long, to live on. Nothing has come to stay, but truth. Take heart and carry on, with peace.

Very deep poem. I'm sorry about you grandpa. :(
Love reading this poem. Keep it up.

Okay,

I think you have some emotion here, but it needs to come out deeper, and trying to add punctuation and capital letters where they should be helps with this...

I have some suggestions, I've written the poem out again, with punctuation and grammar corrections and just added words here and there...

Where are you?
why do I miss you
for I cannot understand.

I am on the ground, you under it,
you left when i was only three
and that was hard on me.

i lived in your home fourteen years ago,
and now I cannot feel you, Why?

I can only see you in my dreams
and that is hard on me,
If you were alive,
would you love or hate this gift of mine?
would you like to listen to it or read what I say?

every day I will dream of you, till the day comes I'll love you.

^^I hope it was okay what I did...just adding the correct punctuation really helps the flow.

But a good piece no doubt.

Thanks crishmer