Great end to this, good poem,

One typo, I know I'll end up loosing you, (losing)

Came with an evil cost
should 'with' be 'at'?
like the flow of the whole thing, no words trip you up.

I like the imagery this line portarys

To hard to find a wall to climb,
When my feelings never change.

You have managed to write a non rhyming poem that feels like it rhymes.
thanks for the read
(sorry I didn't return the favour sooner)

Wonderfully Written Becca.

This is lovely Rebecca.

Ok...ummmm where to start....

'This feels too familiar,
You've swept me off my feet.
You've made me feel so strong again,
I find it hard to speak.'

^^^^^
What the hell is this??? This is one of my ALL TIME FAVOURITE openings EVER!!!!

Damm girl you can write!

Ive yet to read your others but to me it looks like your a natural rhymer - i am too,

The words you chose - perfect
The rhyme scheme and flow - perfect
Imagery was great too

If i had a vote left i would have nominated this.i hope someone does, it deserves to be on the front page :-))

5/5 all day long, well done !!