Very expressive Karla! Really You are a valuable treasure for poetry. I was totally diving with each stanza up to the deepest point! Thank you.

This is beautiful:

'I have bowed to him and it was delicious
to keep my mouth slightly open,
looking through his polite heart,
thinking of my own embarrassment
and adorable lust.'

Gorgeous stanza. Love your choice of adjectives.

5out of 5 i had to read twice i think this may have made my vocabulary a bit bigger looked up a few words. aside from that its lovely

I love the title hun, noble man. It makes me wonder where this person is, what he is like and you have provided a beautiful, in depth description of who this person is.

I love what you have written but the last couple of lines just broke me, for I was saddened by the way you saw yourself. I do not think that of you AT ALL.

You're an amazing woman and friend.

AWESOME WRITE HUN

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Exquisitely Written Karla!!!