Comments : What comes around, goes around

  • 11 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Crucial, heart breaking, tragic. Nice flow of emotion.
    Well expressed and written. Great poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Tanya

    This a well written poem even though it has a few spelling mistakes but that doesn't matter. The one thing I loved while reading was the emotions and your choice of words that you used to describe that emotion.
    Overall, a magnificent poem 10/10 Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Krysten

    I loved the emotion in this one (: well done keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Every deed awaits a reward. Till scarcity, value is lost. End of a matter spells victory. Him who laughs at last, laughs the best.

  • 11 years ago

    by Reyna

    I hope that one day you'll find a girl that will love you for you. you have a kind and happy personality. you deserve more than that. keep up the great poetry.

  • 11 years ago

    by Areeba

    Awesome it was... Really what goes around, comes around ... Keep it up :)

  • 11 years ago

    by losing myself

    I think this is my favorite, it tells a story an that's what i do in all mine and it's an experience, great job^^

  • 11 years ago

    by neon sunset

    Beautiful poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is great and so true... karma will get them everytime :)

  • 11 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Good word flow ((5))

  • 11 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    Beautiful *5*