Comments : Wish you were here

  • 13 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    What a so enticing poem! wonderful! I like it 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    I didn't understand, sorry for the inconvenience, but Karla, is the whole piece the song of Pink Floyd?

    • 13 years ago

      by Karla

      No it isn't Abed. I got just the title cuz that song means a lot to me.

  • 13 years ago

    by Omar

    Nice work. I love it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    Ah okay, I just thought that the 1st half of the poem is for Pink Floyd....

    then now.... God, you really should write songs !!!!

    Though the structure of this poem was weird to my eyes and ears, but I like it. You always have something new to offer to us. You always surprise me, and I always ... have a heart attack!

    Dayum, this is awesomely brilliantly awesome and addicting!

  • 13 years ago

    by amanda

    I love this poem! The structure is a bit odd, but great, and it was very interesting to read. Thank you for writing. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love how you were inspired by music!!!

    A simple but beautiful poem. I love the image of swimming in fish bowls!!! Awesome Karla.

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Karla....i love pink floyd.....i love this write......E-P-I-C!!!!!

    Just fantastic :-))

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Karla....i love pink floyd.....i love this write......E-P-I-C!!!!!

    Just fantastic :-))