Comments : Do you know?

  • 11 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Great display of emotion.
    I know the feeling all too well. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    I like this bc almost everybody can relate to this.
    i think its sad but true 5/5 :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Rebirth

    Omar!!! Damn am speechless

  • 11 years ago

    by amanda

    I can feel the pain in this poem, and i can relate to being blinded by love or happiness. Great job, Omar.

  • 11 years ago

    by Janis

    It is indeed well known sadness to many of us and I like how simple, but well you explained it good job! Also if you don`t mind I would like you to think about these little things - "but they just rushing to get rid of your heart." you need to use either are before rushing like "but they are just rushing...." or use just rush, like "but they just rush..." and "but found out that they change the lock." since this is past tense you should use "....that they have changed the lock" and "but you were blinded by you own love." you should use your instead of you ".....by your own love."
    P.S. Hope I don`t sound too much like grammar nazi here, just I think if it is written in right grammar it sounds better!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tanya

    I love this poem because it is full of emotion and I can totally relate to this. 10/10

  • 11 years ago

    by Reyna

    This poem gives off a lot of emotion. keep it up. and yeah i totally know that feeling. it hurts to be rejected. 5/5 ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Areeba

    Loved it... It was awesome., so much of emotions are put into it ... Great job!! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by losing myself

    Well everyonee basically said it, but i love it too(: i never thought about love this way you described

  • 11 years ago

    by Jess

    Waw,It's deep feelings
    keep on

  • 11 years ago

    by Kayla Heinze

    I lobe this!!! I can relate to all of it sadly haha getting rejected sucks!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kayla Heinze

    I love lol

  • 11 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great write full of emotion 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Good write.
    it's full of heartbreak, i think everyone can relate in some way. i like the 2nd stanza, very nice.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    The last one is the one I am most familiar with. Love, no matter what the outcome, is worth the fight. It helps you see and find what you are looking for :) still, this poem tugs the heart strings of us all.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    This one, I like this much. ;D lol

    so true