Dawn of a new day.

by mo3taz   Jul 8, 2012


Diamond display, of a dawn of a day
Light appears from the first sun ray
goodbye to another gloomy night
moon cried losing its welling light

Now I know with certitude
I'm in calm solitude
And certain that the whole crowd
For leaving me, they done and proud

Boor me, I'm sad and mad
That I'm alone, but I'm a bard
Boor you, you have not thought
what the lonely gift has brought.

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  • 11 years ago

    by mo3taz

    Thanks White Orchid.

  • 11 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I liked this, it had deep emotion in it and I really liked the line "you have not thought what the lonely gift has brought". Sometimes people don't understand how their actions affect ones. I thought this had great flow and really good rhymes. Nice write. And sorry I actually read this poem earlier and was meaning to return to comment on it. But this was written well and I think the spelling you want is "bore" instead of boor. Just something to help ya.