Comments : I and my Rose

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Kahlid- This piece took my breath away!! Oh mercy, the elegance is just wow... radiant flow... just love it!

    I do have one technical thing I would like to point out: Your first word Talks= Would read better if you put : Talk

    I felt like I was in a feild of roses and like a soft symphony was playing in the background... just a beautiful read!! very nice Khalid!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You are very welcome :-)

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    Khalid - this piece is stellar.Maple tree is right, there is such an elegance in it.Bravo!

    • 11 years ago

      by Khalid M Darwish

      Karla You're forcing me to plant all my farm with roses whereby i'll no be able to which rose i decide to talk coz all roses are beautiful. Thank you my friend for brightning my mind horizon.
      <<<Khalid>>>