Marvelous! I enjoyed the flow Karla.

Your endings have something that make me feel that there is so much to say.. so much to ponder upon... loved it.

Wonderful write, good title. I like when there are questions in a poem. 5/5

mandy :)

Put me in awe of this piece, I loved the structure of it and the ending lines of "what is it?" that grab the reader and make their imagination run. Lovely descriptions and mystery, a pleasant one, something that you may find in the middle of a day or right when you wake up that takes you by surprise, perhaps. :)

Very unique- thanks for sharing! Take care.

Oh Karla I feel like I haven't read your pieces in ages, in fact I feel like I haven't read anyones in ages. Been busy so I am trying to catch up on the weekend reading poems that I have missed duing the week.

I simply love the images in this piece, you have a nack for describing things in a poetic way. What I love is the fact that this poem keeps me thinking because you never really tell us what it is that you have seen and felt which is awesome, it keeps us wondering.

Awesome write Karla, I loved it!!!

x

Now I want to know what it is! You did a great job of drawing in the reader and hooking them right off the bat. Each person can draw something different from this piece. I had the image of a person being captured by love and being overcome by this emotion without knowing what it is...but then again people usually know it is love when they feel it. The ending was just brilliant. It helped the poem linger with me longer after I was done reading it. This one is a sure winner.