Watch the world burn.

Beautiful and dark, truly enjoyed. Although i'm no dark knight, I couldn't help but see a piece of me in your words. And the questions were thought provoking.

I have one minor suggestion though, for this particular line:

"Or do you come at with the fury of a thousand men?"

I feel like if you changed "come at" to "come forth" the line would flow even better.

This piece is defintiely appreciated.

I like this...and i like the part where you said...i cannot life you ,my arms are weak and broken, here however,grab my foot,and hold on, those are not yet broken, to me thats says your loyal,kind,and you would always help someone in need...and if you couldent ,you would find a differnt way...

Nice job on this love the title big batman fan keep it up